Ok here is a more updated version I did of my Virus Character. Tell me, what age height and gender does this character look? Even if you know the answer I want to know the range.

I also need another favor, I’m trying to see if I can write a short synopsis about the story but the story is so complex that I don’t know which thing I should focus on at first to grab peoples attention. So hear is a list of characters of the story and of the character and tell me which one would want you to go out a buy this is it was a comic:

Weak legged so has to wear metal shell that was made by uncle
Lives with Uncle owns a Junk yard.
Lives near the police stations and is friends with one of them and loves to hear about her adventures.
Goes door to door in the City of Rothaven doing repairs
Acts as a spy for policemen friend and informs police of conspiring crimes.
Is a genius.
Can fix anything
Is an inventor
Uncle is an artist/sculpture artist.
Has a disorder that the doctors won’t cure that makes it hard for her to gain muscle
Some how has the ability to control energy.
Has a spilt personality
Uncle not really uncle. Was from a right family called the Huntsmore
Has emotional problems
Looks like the opposite gender which confuses people.
Is a contortionist

The thing is, I can make a story two different ways, either making it like steampunkish retro or having it alien high tech and superpower thing I think I high tech getup I previously designed kind of clashed with the whole junk yard thing and I don’t want the story t o clash or be too much. I can make it kind of kidish or make it really serious like in the Robin comics. I know I have to simplify it but I don’t know what. I’m doing the same thing I do with collages. Every thing that look nice I try to paste together. But the plots are so confusing. I could start of off with kid in a junkyard but the wait now the kids a superhero then wait now the kid has super powers then wait, now the kids an alien wanted for high murder! It seems to deviate a little to much. Also I think my character is too goody. Like, can do too much. I don’t want it to be like superman and be able to do everything!! I got to stop meshing my ideas together. Help!


Oh and it’s a girl I don’t know the height to age I should make her though. All I know is that she is tall for her age.

The one thing I like about my character is that she doesn’t play into the stereotypical female superhero. So if I made her a superhero it would be cool cause she is different. She is not very pretty or feminine or strong or has big ol’ boobs or has a perfect body. She has her faults and she has her disorders. She tall and gangly and has frizzy hair and lots of freckles and has strange habits. She is cripple she has emotional problem and mental problems yet she is still able to help other people and make a difference.

But I still just don’t know if I should make her the Junkyard hero or the Alien hightecy Virus.